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Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥
Holy smoke! This poem is amazing. I loved it! Maybe I shouldn't, 'but maybe you should!' Shut up, stupid brain, you won't do any good! This was by far my ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Monsters
Wow. I loved your poem. For not writing poetry, you show a lot of talent in this poem. I really like the way you described the dream and the way ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: A Friendship Worth Saving
Hi, Lee-Anna! Your story was good, but it isn't your best. You were lacking too many details, and I think it would be better if you made it longer. I ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: I Never Understood
Wow, this poem is really good. I enjoyed your details. You truly have a talent at writing poetry and weaving wonderful detail seamlessly into your writing. I loved your unique ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: Nightmare Hosiptal.
This was really good. It took me a while to get it, but after my "ohhh!" moment, it was an odd kind of beautiful. There was more rhyming in the ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: My heart in your hands.
Wow, I really liked your poem! Like other people have said, it's not the best. It could be improved by spending time on unique ways in telling your emotions. Poetry ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: A Star for You
Your poem was good. I enjoyed reading it, but it did seem awkward. You rhymed some words and not others. Then, you described pretty much the same things in multiple ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Invisible
Hi there, I love the simplicity of the poem, and you showed great creativity in it. I also think that something to make your poem better is to reword the ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: You Were There
Hi EmelyEverAfter, The first line made me think the speaker and the person the speaker was talking about were married. In my mind, I think if you weren't writing this ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: what is earth like?
This poem is pretty good. I will suggest that you work on the flow, and the length of the lines. The different line lengths missed up the flow and caused ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Today is one of those days - edited
This poem kind of blew me away. It was very descriptive and made me feel like I was there writing the poem. It is cute, and one of those poems ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
This poem is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm sure your girlfriend will love it. There isn't really anything for me to suggest besides you might want to work ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: ..
This is simplely wonderful. What a great read and poem! I loved it. (: It was sweet and inspiring. Like several people have said earlier, I applaud the fact you ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
Wow, your poem really made me think about my faith and how I show and represent my faith to others. It also touched emotion. As a person just getting into ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
You ,once again, have blown my mind. This is a great story and I want more. Sure you made some grammar mistakes, but those can be easily fixed. Its amazing ...
Mar 27, 2010
